{"id":1161,"date":"2019-06-02T08:02:31","date_gmt":"2019-06-02T00:02:31","guid":{"rendered":"http:\/\/people.utm.my\/hadijahjaffri\/?p=1161"},"modified":"2019-06-02T08:18:55","modified_gmt":"2019-06-02T00:18:55","slug":"1161-2","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"https:\/\/people.utm.my\/hadijahjaffri\/1161-2\/","title":{"rendered":"Feedback"},"content":{"rendered":"

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When I did my Latihan Ikhtisas, I was entrusted to teach form 1, 4 and 6 (MUET).\u00a0 For form 4, I have to teach five types of continuous writing.\u00a0 One of it is descriptive composition.\u00a0 For descriptive composition, one either has to describe a person, an event or a place.\u00a0 There is no specific plot like narrative composition, yet it requires the writer to write detailed descriptions of a theme (either a person, an event or a place).<\/span><\/p>\n

I don’t know how to give comments to students so I learn from one of my former students who happens to be an examiner for SPM paper (essay paper).\u00a0 So, she told me that I need to give examples of sentences or paragraph and give some words of encouragement.\u00a0 So, I tried it out.\u00a0 But, it was a tedious process because I have to give different feedback to different students.\u00a0 <\/span><\/p>\n

Alhamdulillah, I am so used to give lengthy feedback for my UG and PG students, so I don’t have much problem in that.\u00a0 It is just that unlike UG or PG students, I need to explain to the form 4 students what does the feedback mean because some of them don’t understand certain words that I used due to poor vocabulary.\u00a0 But it is a learning process, so it is important to introduce them certain words so they could get familiar with the words and they can see how the words are used in sentences as I wrote it in my feedback.\u00a0 For this particular student, he doesn’t know the word ‘appropriate’.\u00a0 So, I explained to him what the word ‘appropriate’ means and how to use it.\u00a0\u00a0<\/span><\/p>\n

Example of the feedback as in the picture:<\/span><\/p>\n

Hafid,\u00a0<\/span><\/strong><\/em><\/p>\n

You need to improve on your vocabulary and grammar.\u00a0 The way you wrote this composition, it is as if you think in Malay and translate it into English.\u00a0 This style of writing is not appropriate.\u00a0 You need to practice to think in English when writing in English.\u00a0<\/strong><\/em>\u00a0<\/span><\/p>\n","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"

When I did my Latihan Ikhtisas, I was entrusted to teach form 1, 4 and 6 (MUET).\u00a0 For form 4, I have to teach five types of continuous writing.\u00a0 One of it is descriptive composition.\u00a0 For descriptive composition, one either has to describe a person, an event or a place.\u00a0 There is no specific plot … Continue reading Feedback<\/span><\/a><\/p>\n","protected":false},"author":851,"featured_media":0,"comment_status":"closed","ping_status":"closed","sticky":false,"template":"","format":"standard","meta":{"footnotes":""},"categories":[5,1],"tags":[],"class_list":["post-1161","post","type-post","status-publish","format-standard","hentry","category-teaching","category-uncategorized"],"_links":{"self":[{"href":"https:\/\/people.utm.my\/hadijahjaffri\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts\/1161","targetHints":{"allow":["GET"]}}],"collection":[{"href":"https:\/\/people.utm.my\/hadijahjaffri\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts"}],"about":[{"href":"https:\/\/people.utm.my\/hadijahjaffri\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/types\/post"}],"author":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/people.utm.my\/hadijahjaffri\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/users\/851"}],"replies":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/people.utm.my\/hadijahjaffri\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/comments?post=1161"}],"version-history":[{"count":6,"href":"https:\/\/people.utm.my\/hadijahjaffri\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts\/1161\/revisions"}],"predecessor-version":[{"id":1167,"href":"https:\/\/people.utm.my\/hadijahjaffri\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts\/1161\/revisions\/1167"}],"wp:attachment":[{"href":"https:\/\/people.utm.my\/hadijahjaffri\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/media?parent=1161"}],"wp:term":[{"taxonomy":"category","embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/people.utm.my\/hadijahjaffri\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/categories?post=1161"},{"taxonomy":"post_tag","embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/people.utm.my\/hadijahjaffri\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/tags?post=1161"}],"curies":[{"name":"wp","href":"https:\/\/api.w.org\/{rel}","templated":true}]}}